The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The picture compares the layout of an
island
before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Obviously, the island
is set to be transformed from an unexploited area into a tourist attraction with a variety of facilities added to cater for the needs of tourists.
Originally, there were only some forests dotted in the east and west of the island
, where no man-made constructions exist. There is a pier built in the southeastern part of the island
to accommodate boats, thus
making it possible for tourists to travel the island
. Connected with the pier is a reception, which is surrounded by the vehicle track and links with a restaurant located behind it, with two clusters of accommodation huts situated on the right and left sides.
The beach remains unchanged, but swimming sets to be available for visitors. Trees in the east of the island
are around by footbath, woods and the landscape in the western part of the island
still maintains undeveloped.Submitted by 76805977 on
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