The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the drinking habits in per cent in the US with the age parameter.
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divided
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into
bracket
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brackets
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which
starts
with 16 and Correct subject-verb agreement
start
ends
with 74. Correct subject-verb agreement
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Overall
, people who never were drinker have Linking Words
main
proportion but it falls in the during years. Correct article usage
the main
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, number of the ex-Linking Words
drinkers
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rise
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rises
in
after the age of 45.
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apply
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, the folks who are not a drinker are the major shares in each bracket and the maximum number of Correct your spelling
Primarily
that is
in the Linking Words
fisrt
bar with around 60 per cent.Correct your spelling
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However
it drops to Add a comma
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near
45 per cent in the 65-74 years range. Change the word
nearly
In contrast
, people Linking Words
that
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who
ex-drinker
have a dramatic increase in percentage end of during life Fix the agreement mistake
ex-drinkers
time
.
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lifetime
On the other hand
, heavy Linking Words
drinkers
and light Use synonyms
drinkers
fluctuate in each bracket.The Use synonyms
higest numeber
of heavy Correct your spelling
highest number
drinkers
is in the Use synonyms
middle ages
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Middle Ages
.light
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Light
drinkers
are part of society which Use synonyms
are
in the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
begining
of adultness.Correct your spelling
beginning
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Vocabulary: Replace the words drinkers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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