The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing houswork in housholds in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing houswork in housholds in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The two graphs illustrate the proportion of electrical machines in houses,
as well as
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the
number
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of housework per week spent in a certain country during the
last
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100 years.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the proportion of
the
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refrigerator ownership skyrocketed
while
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the
number
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of washing machines rose moderately between 1920 and 2019. At the same
time
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the
number
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of hours of housework plummeted several times. The
number
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of refrigerators
raised up
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increased
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tremendously from
the
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zero
percentage
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at the very beginning to 100% in 1980. The rate of vacuum cleaners soared almost with the same estimation from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000.
However
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, the proportion of washing machines increased less than two times during the all period with the figures of 40% to roughly 70%.
Due to
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these innovations, the amount of housework decreased crucially from
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50 hours per week to 10 hours weekly in 1920 and 2019 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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