Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers ,should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that experts should work in their own
country
Use synonyms
while
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the
others believe in Correct article usage
apply
individuals
freedom Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
for choosing
their workplace. Change preposition
to choose
This
essay will consider both Linking Words
side
of the statement. Change to a plural noun
sides
Overall
, in my perspective, choosing a place for Linking Words
doing
a career is one of the fundamental human rights and it should not be limited.
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apply
To begin
with, Linking Words
according to
some, as the government allocate a great deal of money to training professionals, they are expected to assist Linking Words
developing
their own society rather than immigrating Change preposition
in developing
to
overseas and helping Change preposition
apply
another communities
. Replace the adjective
another community
other communities
However
, if adequate infrastructures not be provided for finding or running decent jobs it would not be possible to restrict educated workers in their Linking Words
country
. Imagine a doctor who Use synonyms
had
studied intensively but is not able to afford an office ,Wrong verb form
has
meanwhile
a reasonable job offer in another Add a comma
meanwhile,
country
,including all accommodations and Use synonyms
high
salary, is recommended to them. In Correct article usage
a high
this
situation, accepting that position would be definitely a logical decision.
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On the contrary
, some believe that human beings are expected to be free to work wherever they wish. Linking Words
In other words
, putting pressure on people Linking Words
for working
in their own Change preposition
to work
country
without considering their basic rights and requirements not only is not moral but Use synonyms
also
can be a fruitless exercise. Since individuals are likely not to act efficiently in a Linking Words
force
condition Replace the word
forced
and
it will result in Correct word choice
apply
anxious
and unproductive Society. Correct article usage
an anxious
For instance
, a Linking Words
studios
young engineer ,who has graduated recently and is eager to take part in international projects, would be disappointed if could not achieve their goal.
In conclusion, Change noun form
studio's
while
people may vary in their opinion in case of choosing another Linking Words
country
for doing Use synonyms
job
, I think that it should be unlimited Add an article
the job
a job
due to
the individual’s obvious right of freedom and pursuing dream.Linking Words
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