Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers ,should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that experts should work in their own

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others believe in

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freedom

for choosing

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their workplace.

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essay will consider both

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of the statement.

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a career is one of the fundamental human rights and it should not be limited.

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some, as the government allocate a great deal of money to training professionals, they are expected to assist

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their own society rather than immigrating

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overseas and helping

another communities

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, if adequate infrastructures not be provided for finding or running decent jobs it would not be possible to restrict educated workers in their

country

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. Imagine a doctor who

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studied intensively but is not able to afford an office ,

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a reasonable job offer in another

country

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,including all accommodations and

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salary, is recommended to them. In

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situation, accepting that position would be definitely a logical decision.

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, some believe that human beings are expected to be free to work wherever they wish.

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, putting pressure on people

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in their own

country

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without considering their basic rights and requirements not only is not moral but

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can be a fruitless exercise. Since individuals are likely not to act efficiently in a

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condition

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it will result in

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and unproductive Society.

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young engineer ,who has graduated recently and is eager to take part in international projects, would be disappointed if could not achieve their goal. In conclusion,

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people may vary in their opinion in case of choosing another

country

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for doing

job

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, I think that it should be unlimited

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the individual’s obvious right of freedom and pursuing dream.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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globalization
international collaboration
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