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The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
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The given chart illustrates the
percentage
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 of different kinds of
garbage
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 collected on two different sides of the beach
on
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 a whole day.
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, the most
garbage
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 that was collected was plastic,
whereas
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 the
least
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lowest
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percentage
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 of collected
garbage
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 was metal. Taking a closer look, plastic accounted as the highest amount of collected
garbage
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 on the beach, which was slightly more than half of the total of
garbage
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 which was at 53.5%, and followed by paper with a significant gap in second place, which was at 29.1%. The
percentage
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 for the third place had a significant difference as well from paper and was claimed by the collected
garbage
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 other than glass, metal, paper, and plastic with, a
percentage
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 of 9.3%.
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, glass had a small
percentage
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 of 4.3%.
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, glass had a slight difference of 0.5% with the lowest
percentage
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 of collected
garbage
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, which was metal at 3.8%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, garbage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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