The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach.

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The given chart illustrates the
percentage
of different kinds of
garbage
collected on two different sides of the beach
on
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for
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a whole day.
Overall
, the most
garbage
that was collected was plastic,
whereas
the
least
Correct word choice
lowest
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percentage
of collected
garbage
was metal. Taking a closer look, plastic accounted as the highest amount of collected
garbage
on the beach, which was slightly more than half of the total of
garbage
which was at 53.5%, and followed by paper with a significant gap in second place, which was at 29.1%. The
percentage
for the third place had a significant difference as well from paper and was claimed by the collected
garbage
other than glass, metal, paper, and plastic with, a
percentage
of 9.3%.
Furthermore
, glass had a small
percentage
of 4.3%.
In addition
, glass had a slight difference of 0.5% with the lowest
percentage
of collected
garbage
, which was metal at 3.8%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, garbage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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