The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The given chart illustrates the
percentage
of different kinds of Use synonyms
garbage
collected on two different sides of the beach Use synonyms
on
a whole day. Change preposition
for
Overall
, the most Linking Words
garbage
that was collected was plastic, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
least
Correct word choice
lowest
percentage
of collected Use synonyms
garbage
was metal.
Taking a closer look, plastic accounted as the highest amount of collected Use synonyms
garbage
on the beach, which was slightly more than half of the total of Use synonyms
garbage
which was at 53.5%, and followed by paper with a significant gap in second place, which was at 29.1%.
The Use synonyms
percentage
for the third place had a significant difference as well from paper and was claimed by the collected Use synonyms
garbage
other than glass, metal, paper, and plastic with, a Use synonyms
percentage
of 9.3%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, glass had a small Linking Words
percentage
of 4.3%. Use synonyms
In addition
, glass had a slight difference of 0.5% with the lowest Linking Words
percentage
of collected Use synonyms
garbage
, which was metal at 3.8%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, garbage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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