The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The given chart illustrates the
percentage
of different kinds of garbage
collected on two different sides of the beach on
a whole day. Change preposition
for
Overall
, the most garbage
that was collected was plastic, whereas
the least
Correct word choice
lowest
percentage
of collected garbage
was metal.
Taking a closer look, plastic accounted as the highest amount of collected garbage
on the beach, which was slightly more than half of the total of garbage
which was at 53.5%, and followed by paper with a significant gap in second place, which was at 29.1%.
The percentage
for the third place had a significant difference as well from paper and was claimed by the collected garbage
other than glass, metal, paper, and plastic with, a percentage
of 9.3%. Furthermore
, glass had a small percentage
of 4.3%. In addition
, glass had a slight difference of 0.5% with the lowest percentage
of collected garbage
, which was metal at 3.8%.Submitted by writingielts0 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, garbage with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
▼