The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map above demonstrates a landscape illustrating three feasible points where an amusement park could be built.
Overall
, there are three possible areas showing different characteristics. We can see that point A is a factory,
while
B looks like an apartment.
In contrast
, location C is a kind of wood.
Therefore
, the most possible place for an entertainment park is on the land surrounded by trees. The forest is a great site because of the space that they have. The developer can build the estate as big as they want for there are no buildings near the venue. On the other side, A and B are not suitable for recreation centres. From the picture above, there are already buildings there both in A and in B.
Furthermore
, Spot A is an industrial zone which will irritate people who come to the square if the consolation base
built
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there
due to
their waste production. Not only the manufactory, but the apartment is
also
unfavourable
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the unfavourable
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location for constructing the place since it is a residential area.
Although
people living around there can have easy access to the playground, it is still can disrupt them as the leisure centre's visitors are not just them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • prospective
  • recreational facilities
  • infrastructure
  • proximity
  • pedestrian access
  • public transport links
  • green spaces
  • commercial area
  • residential zone
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental impact
  • urban planning
  • feasibility
  • demographics
  • footfall
  • zoning regulations
  • land use
  • catchment area
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