The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The demonstrated two maps illustrate the development and the variations that were conducted in the
museum
in 1998 and a decade later. In general, there were many changes and improvements implemented in the
museum
,
although
the old
rooms
were
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still exist.
To begin
with, in 1998, there
was
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three permanent exhibition
rooms
and seven other different
rooms
.
Moreover
, two
rooms
of permanent exhibition were located on the right side,
while
the third one was situated in the left corner of the
museum
.
On the other hand
, in 2008, some changes were implemented on the west side of the
museum
like
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the shop and bags and coats
room
moved into the
south west
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corner of it.
However
,
toilet’s
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place was
also
vary. In 2008, it was situated next to the cafe which is located in the north.
In addition
, the largest
room
which was located in the
center
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of the
museum
,
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was developed with some
adding
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facilities,
such
as
cafe
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sitting zone and fountains.
Furthermore
, on the left side, two
room
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were added. In the north left corner, there was a restaurant and in the
middle
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there was a new
room
erected called temporary exhibition.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, rooms, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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