The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The demonstrated two maps illustrate the development and the variations that were conducted in the
museum
in 1998 and a decade later.
In general, there were many changes and improvements implemented in the museum
, although
the old rooms
were
still exist.
Unnecessary verb
apply
To begin
with, in 1998, there was
three permanent exhibition Correct subject-verb agreement
were
rooms
and seven other different rooms
. Moreover
, two rooms
of permanent exhibition were located on the right side, while
the third one was situated in the left corner of the museum
.
On the other hand
, in 2008, some changes were implemented on the west side of the museum
like
the shop and bags and coats Replace the word
as
room
moved into the south west
corner of it. Correct your spelling
southwest
However
, toilet’s
place was Correct article usage
the toilet’s
also
vary. In 2008, it was situated next to the cafe which is located in the north. In addition
, the largest room
which was located in the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
museum
,
was developed with some Remove the comma
apply
adding
facilities, Wrong verb form
added
such
as cafe
sitting zone and fountains. Correct article usage
a cafe
Furthermore
, on the left side, two room
were added. In the north left corner, there was a restaurant and in the Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
middle
there was a new Add a comma
middle,
room
erected called temporary exhibition.Submitted by f201600285 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, rooms, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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