The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first graph depicts the percentage of
households
usage of three items Change noun form
households'
household's
of
washing machine refrigerator and Change preposition
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vaccum
cleaner Correct your spelling
vacuum
in
during a period of 80 years in a particular country Change preposition
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as well as
the number of hours per week Linking Words
were
spent on housework are shown in the second chart.
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Overall
, as it can be seen the highest level of expenditure belonged to refrigerators in 1980, Linking Words
while
they experienced the lowest level in 1920.
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According to
the given graphs, the proportion consumption of washing Linking Words
machine
increased dramatically from the early Fix the agreement mistake
machines
every
two decades. (from 0 to100% from on 19200)
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Also
based on the given data in the second chart, the number of hours which were allocated to chores Linking Words
such
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:
washing clothes ,preparing meals and cleaning decreased gradually from 50 per Remove the comma
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of
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a
week to a bit more than 10 hours from 1920 to 2019. Correct article usage
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To sum up
, Linking Words
although
refrigerators were the second item for consumption in 1920,afterwards Linking Words
vaccim
cleaner and washing Correct your spelling
vacuum
machine
exceeded Fix the agreement mistake
machines
a
noticeable expenditures in the later years.Correct the article-noun agreement
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