You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine in your letter Explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved
Dear Amal,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you of my expression about our cafeteria it is a gorgeous place at the university, and we would be changed for the better.
As you know, you have some magnificent items it is very useful for us like chairs, tables and the colour of the walls.
Let me tell you about some wrong the cafeteria has mistaken as the food is not healthy occasionally it is junk food, but the students prefer the healthy food like seafood, salad or any high-value dishes greatly. Also
, you are using glass cups we don't like it if is blended, but we don't have time to wait for the drink to be cold.
I want to suggest some ideas if you don't mind, the atmosphere is pretty colder if you want to change this
we appreciate. Secondly
, the next to the cafeteria has a free place I have suggested bringing some books to read if we have time.
I thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
MonirahSubmitted by M on
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