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The graph below shows the amounts spent on cloths on the internet in the USA and japan between 1999 and 2003

The graph below shows the amounts spent on cloths on the internet in the USA and japan between 1999 and 2003
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The data given presents
the
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information
of
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on
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 the
money
people
 spent
for
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on
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 online shopping in the USA and Japan from 1999 to 2003.
Overall
, it can be seen that the online shopping trends showed similar
patern
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patterns
 both for Japanese and
American
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Americans
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 throughout a given period.
However
, in the first observed
period
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period,
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 Japanese
people
 spent more
money
 and eventually the amount of
money
 spent reached the same figures
at the end
 of 2003. In the beginning year
on
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of
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 1999, the amount spent on clothes in Japan exceeded
in
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that in
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 the USA, and it presented at 10 and 5
millions
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million
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 USD respectively.
Nexy
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Next
 year, the trend
kepts
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keeps
kept
 suddenly decreasing, yet American
people
 expressed more
antusiasm
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enthusiasm
 compared to Japanese
people
 in 2001 by its number. It was told by the slightly different
money
 spent approximately at 7 and 6
millions
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million
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 USD. For the next two years, both nationalities showed a drastic increasing trend toward buying
apparels
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apparel
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 on online platforms and it reached
at
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its peak number at the same level of
dollar
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dollars
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 spent at 20
millions
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million
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 USD each.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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