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The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
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The pie chart demonstrates the amount of each type of litter (
glass
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, metal,
paper
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,
plastic
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, and other types of litter) collected in one day at
two
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 different locations on the
beach
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.
Overall
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,
plastic
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 constitutes the majority of the total amount of litter on the
beach
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while
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glass
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 is littered the least on the
beach
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. It can be seen from the pie chart that the
two
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 most popular
trash
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that is
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 littered across the
beach
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 are
plastic
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 and
paper
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. With 53.5%,
plastic
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 is the type of
trash
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that is
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 littered the most
while
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paper
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, with 29.1%, is the second most littered
trash
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 at the
beach
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.
On the other hand
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, the
two
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 least littered
trash
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 on the
beach
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are
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is
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glass
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 and other types of
trash
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 aside from
glass
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, metal,
paper
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, and
plastic
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 with 4.7% and 9.3% respectively. From the figure, it can be inferred that these
two
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 materials are used least in areas near the
beach
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, paper, plastic, two, beach, trash with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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