The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The pie chart demonstrates the amount of each type of litter (
glass
, metal, paper
, plastic
, and other types of litter) collected in one day at two
different locations on the beach
.
Overall
, plastic
constitutes the majority of the total amount of litter on the beach
while
glass
is littered the least on the beach
.
It can be seen from the pie chart that the two
most popular trash
that is
littered across the beach
are plastic
and paper
. With 53.5%, plastic
is the type of trash
that is
littered the most while
paper
, with 29.1%, is the second most littered trash
at the beach
.
On the other hand
, the two
least littered trash
on the beach
are
Change the verb form
is
glass
and other types of trash
aside from glass
, metal, paper
, and plastic
with 4.7% and 9.3% respectively. From the figure, it can be inferred that these two
materials are used least in areas near the beach
.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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