The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The charts below show the types of litter collected on one day at two different parts of a beach.

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The pie chart demonstrates the amount of each type of litter (
glass
, metal,
paper
,
plastic
, and other types of litter) collected in one day at
two
different locations on the
beach
.
Overall
,
plastic
constitutes the majority of the total amount of litter on the
beach
while
glass
is littered the least on the
beach
. It can be seen from the pie chart that the
two
most popular
trash
that is
littered across the
beach
are
plastic
and
paper
. With 53.5%,
plastic
is the type of
trash
that is
littered the most
while
paper
, with 29.1%, is the second most littered
trash
at the
beach
.
On the other hand
, the
two
least littered
trash
on the
beach
are
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is
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glass
and other types of
trash
aside from
glass
, metal,
paper
, and
plastic
with 4.7% and 9.3% respectively. From the figure, it can be inferred that these
two
materials are used least in areas near the
beach
.
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