Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I agree that some
people
prefer to live in small Use synonyms
towns
whilst others prefer to live in big Use synonyms
cities
. Use synonyms
According to
me, living in a small Linking Words
town
has its advantages Use synonyms
than
living in big Change preposition
over
cities
. In Use synonyms
this
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essay
I will be mentioning reasons and details to support my answer.
Add a comma
essay,
People
who prefer to live in small Use synonyms
towns
usually love to stay there as it is very calm compared to living in the Use synonyms
city
. Small Use synonyms
towns
are now developed and have almost all the facilities that a big Use synonyms
city
has. They have good hospitals, Use synonyms
grocercery
stores, malls, movie theatres, etc. Correct your spelling
grocery
Linking Words
Although living
in the Correct word choice
Living
city
has everything right in the corner and is easily accessible anywhere and at any time. The big Use synonyms
cities
are Use synonyms
usualy
too Correct your spelling
usually
corwded
and noisy Correct your spelling
crowded
during
Change preposition
at
anytime
of the day Replace the word
any time
whereas
, Linking Words
on the other hand
, small Linking Words
towns
are peaceful to live in and Use synonyms
is
not Correct subject-verb agreement
are
over crowded
.
An article that was written by Thomas Welston in the year 1998, Correct your spelling
overcrowded
also
proves that 85% of Linking Words
people
prefer to live in smaller Use synonyms
towns
compared to those living in the big Use synonyms
cities
. I believe thatUse synonyms
,
it depends from person to person where they prefer to live depending on their needs and circumstances.Remove the comma
apply
For instance
, some Linking Words
people
may prefer living in smaller Use synonyms
towns
but Use synonyms
due to
their Linking Words
work
they have to move to the Add a comma
work,
city
as it will be easy for them to travel to work. The same applies to Use synonyms
people
who prefer to live in the Use synonyms
city
but they have to move to a smaller Use synonyms
town
to either look after their family or for various other reasons including work.
Use synonyms
Therefore
, I believe that most Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
prefer to live in a smaller Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
due to
the reasons I have stated in the above paragraphs. In conclusion, living in a smaller Linking Words
town
can be calming to an Use synonyms
individuals
life and can be Change noun form
individual's
stress free
for some Add a hyphen
stress-free
people
.Use synonyms
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task achievement
Ensure you directly address the question prompt. Clearly state your preference and support it with specific reasons and examples to fulfill the task achievement criteria thoroughly.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example