The pie charts below show the data regarding the time people spend on smartphones and tablets, divided by category.

The pie charts below show the data regarding the time people spend on smartphones and tablets, divided by category.
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provides
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statistical data about how people
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time on
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gadgets
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as smartphones or tablets. As it can be observed games occupy the largest segment on both devices being
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with news. In the first pie
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it can be observed that games
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital devices
  • Proportion
  • Communication
  • Entertainment
  • Work-related tasks
  • Productivity
  • Miscellaneous activities
  • Time distribution
  • Prevalence
  • Dedicate
  • Allocate
  • Examine
  • Observation
  • Impact
  • Time management
  • Edit documents
  • Professional communication
  • Personal finance management
  • Streaming services
  • Social media platforms
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