The pie charts below show the data regarding the time people spend on smartphones and tablets, divided by category.
these two pie
carts
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charts
provides
statistical data about how people Change the verb form
provide
spent
time on Wrong verb form
spend
gadges
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gadgets
such
as smartphones or tablets. As it can be observed games occupy the largest segment on both devices being in contrast
with news.
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it can be observed that games Add a comma
chart,
has
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have
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