The maps underneath describes the changes that have taken place in and around Queen Mary Hospital since its building in 1960 till 2000

The maps underneath describes the changes that have taken place in and around Queen Mary Hospital since its building in 1960 till 2000
The maps below illustrate some developments which took place at a certain hospital named Queen Mary Hospital
also
, from the time it was built until 2000.The changes that occurred at the hospital happened after every twenty years .
Besides
, all of the three plans do have roads. The picture from 1960 shows four constructions which are the Shopping
Center
, Hospital,Farmland
as well as
Car Park.
Furthermore
,these constructions occupied the land equally into four quarters.
Nevertheless
,in 1980 there were changes that took place as the Shopping
Center
upgraded into a Cancer
Center
and Pharmacy.
Additionally
, the Farmland turned into a Nursing school.
Moreover
,neither the Hospital nor the car park changed positions.
In addition
, In 2000 construction
also
took part as the Cancer
Center
enlarged replacing some of the Nursing School again and the Car Park .
Moreover
,neither the Pharmacy nor the Hospital changed location on the map in 2000.
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  • infrastructure
  • expansion
  • facilities
  • road patterns
  • specialized clinics
  • green spaces
  • natural features
  • residential development
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