A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/she has written to ask for your advice.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter •describe why you think he/she will enjoy it •explain why you recommend studying at your university •give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear
Dear Ali,
I hope you are doing well. I already found your letter recently, I'm happy for you if you want to continue your education to a higher level. Nowadays, we have to be able to compete in the field of education, and one of the ways is to go to college. I would like to advise you to study at one of the best universities in the world, explanations and information I have provided can give you the consideration to continue your study
Oxford
University
. I have completed my bachelor
over there.
Add a missing verb
bachelor's
In addition
, you will learn new cultures there such
as respecting labour, keeping clean, and most importantly there is no juvenile delinquency. Moreover
, there are some benefits that you get if you are continuing study
abroad at Fix the infinitive
to study
Oxford
University
. For examples
, you will be provided with dormitory facilities, meals, and transport and all Fix the agreement mistake
example
that is
obtained for free.
If you are interesting
Replace the word
interested
to apply
for admission, you be able to visit their website. There you will find what documents are required for registration. Fortunately, all registration and submission Change preposition
in applying
is
done online, so you don't have to bother visiting Change the verb form
are
Oxford
University
.
I hopeCorrect article usage
the
in
Change preposition
at
Oxford
University
. I am looking forward to hearing a good news
from you.
Yours Sincerely,
AdamRemove the article
good news
a piece of good news
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coherence cohesion
The letter lacks a clear logical structure which makes it difficult to follow at times. The ideas should be presented in a more organized manner with clear transitions between them.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are not well-defined. It is important to start with a clear greeting, such as 'Dear [Name],' and end with a proper farewell to make the letter more personal and respectful.
coherence cohesion
Try to focus on one clear idea per paragraph, and elaborate on that particular idea to ensure clarity and a well-structured argument within each section of your letter.
task achievement
Be sure to address all parts of the task with sufficient detail. Each bullet point from the question must be covered thoroughly to ensure a complete response to the task.
task achievement
The tone of the letter should be more suitable for the task. Use a more formal and polite tone in your writing when providing advice and making recommendations, especially in the context of a letter to a friend considering studying abroad.