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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studiying full-time or part-time.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studiying full-time or part-time.
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The bar graph illustrates the
number
 of
people
 in
the
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tertiary education whether they were full-time
students
 or part-time
students
according to
 their
genders
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gender
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 in Britain from 1970 to 1991.
Overall
, both males and females mostly studied as part-time
students
 throughout the
period
,
however
, the
number
 of individuals
studied
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who studied
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 as full-time
students
 increased gradually over time.  In
Britain
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Britain,
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 both men and women predominantly studied as part-time
students
 throughout the
period
. Between 1970 and 1971, there were about 1 million males that were working as part-time
students
 in Britain which slightly decreased to around 870
thousand
students
 before inclining to approximately 900
thousands
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thousand
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 in the season of 1990/91. The
number
 of women who had part-time education was just below 800
thousand
people
 in the beginning and
this
 gradually rose to almost 1.2 million individuals, ending the entire
period
 at the highest point. 
People
 who had full-time education
was
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were
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 always a minority of the population for both genders. The
number
 of males and females that studied as full-time
students
 increased gradually over time and these values varied between around 50
thousand
people
 and about 300
thousand
 individuals over the entire
period
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, students, period, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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