The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studiying full-time or part-time.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of people
in the
tertiary education whether they were full-time Correct article usage
apply
students
or part-time students
according to
their genders
in Britain from 1970 to 1991. Fix the agreement mistake
gender
Overall
, both males and females mostly studied as part-time students
throughout the period
, however
, the number
of individuals studied
as full-time Correct pronoun usage
who studied
students
increased gradually over time.
In Britain
both men and women predominantly studied as part-time Add a comma
Britain,
students
throughout the period
. Between 1970 and 1971, there were about 1 million males that were working as part-time students
in Britain which slightly decreased to around 870 thousand
students
before inclining to approximately 900 thousands
in the season of 1990/91. The Change to singular
thousand
number
of women who had part-time education was just below 800 thousand
people
in the beginning and this
gradually rose to almost 1.2 million individuals, ending the entire period
at the highest point.
People
who had full-time education was
always a minority of the population for both genders. The Correct subject-verb agreement
were
number
of males and females that studied as full-time students
increased gradually over time and these values varied between around 50 thousand
people
and about 300 thousand
individuals over the entire period
.Submitted by historicalpen on
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