The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009
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The table chart presents the data about the
salaries
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of both secondary and high school teachers in Australia, Denmark,
Luxembourg
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, Japan and Korea in 2009. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, the country's
most high-paid
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highest
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salary was
Luxembourg
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,
whereas
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the lowest salary that was paid to teachers was in Australia. Among all 5 countries, in 2009, Australia’s and Denmark’s teachers’
salaries
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rose from 28,000 to 48,000 in 9
years
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and 45,000 to 54,000 in 8
years
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, respectively, reaching their maximum.
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, in
Luxembourg
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, Japan and Korea
salaries
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were increasing even after 15
years
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from the year when the teacher first time was hired. In
Luxembourg
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, where the initial
salaries
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were 80,000, after 15
years
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can be increased to 119,000 and in another 15
years
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may rise to 132,000. After the first 15
years
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from the date of the first start of work, Japanese and Korean teachers’
salaries
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rose from starting
salaries
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of 34,000 and 30,000 to 65,000 and 48,000, respectively. If
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count from the beginning of the day of admission, the
salaries
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in Japan reach its peak
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86,000 in 37
years
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,
while
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in Korea, the maximum of 62,000 is reached in 34
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, luxembourg, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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