The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The flow chart illustrates the procedure of old plastic bottle utilisation.
Overall
, it can be seen that
this
is a largely mechanical process consisting of two main stages: accumulating plastic waste in a recycling center and converting the elastic waste into new products. The first stage takes three steps
such
as plastic is collected from dumpsters everywhere on the street, carried by trash lorry to the refinery factory and sorted manually on the right and inappropriate kind of material. The second stage is wholly mechanical and comprises six steps.
First,
is compressing appropriate waste into big square blocs.
Secondly
, crashing that mass into small pieces by big rotating machine blocs on
this
step. After that, washing those pieces with a purpose to eliminate all mess.
Next,
producing moulded pellets of smaller size and hitting them to form raw material.
Finally
, producing end products
such
as new containers, bags or t-shirts from the raw material.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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