The diagram below give information about the manufacture frozen fish pie.

The diagram below give information about the manufacture frozen fish pie.
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how frozen
fish
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pie is prepared in a factory production line.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
fish
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pie consists of several layers
such
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as
potato
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,
fish
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, peas and sauce placed in the microwaveable container. All production procedures can be split into two main parts.
Potato
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preparation and combining
fish
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with other ingredients. The first stage is wholly mechanic and takes several steps
such
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as
potato
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delivery (up to the month supplement), cleaning, waste disposal, peeling, slicing, boiling, chilling and storing. Right after that prepared product pieces go to the second conveyor. The second stage is partly mechanical and partly manual and comprises several steps.
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, salmon is placed on the production line.
Secondly
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, lemon juice and salt are added to the
fish
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.
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all ingredients are cooked in the steam oven. Following that skin and bones are removed manually by people in hats and quality is controlled by the angry women. Right after that,
fish
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is combined with prepared peas, sauce and
potato
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.
The next step is
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wrapping the prepared pie and putting it to the freeze ready to dispatch.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, potato with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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