The diagram below give information about the manufacture frozen fish pie.
The picture and flow chart
illustrate
how frozen Change the verb form
illustrates
fish
pie is prepared in a factory production line.
Overall
, it can be seen that fish
pie consists of several layers such
as potato
, fish
, peas and sauce placed in the microwaveable container. All production procedures can be split into two main parts. Potato
preparation and combining fish
with other ingredients.
The first stage is wholly mechanic and takes several steps such
as potato
delivery (up to the month supplement), cleaning, waste disposal, peeling, slicing, boiling, chilling and storing. Right after that prepared product pieces go to the second conveyor.
The second stage is partly mechanical and partly manual and comprises several steps. Firstly
, salmon is placed on the production line. Secondly
, lemon juice and salt are added to the fish
. Next,
all ingredients are cooked in the steam oven. Following that skin and bones are removed manually by people in hats and quality is controlled by the angry women. Right after that, fish
is combined with prepared peas, sauce and potato
. The next step is
wrapping the prepared pie and putting it to the freeze ready to dispatch.Submitted by tarasovnn on
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