The best way to educate children is by using the Internet in every lesson. To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making it effective for children?
Nowadays, because of the development of technology, many tutors push
children
to use
the Internet
in all their education. However
, this
is not the key to being effective in children
’s lessons. However
, it is advisable to mention two other ways
of teaching children
effectively.
On the one hand, it is true that using the internet
in some lessons would be sufficient for adolescents. But there are numerous negative impacts on pupils. By this
, we mean that this
leads to pupils not following other ways
and they are just choosing easy ways
such
as the Internet
. For example
, searching their tasks investigation by using the internet
instead
of practical scrutinizing. Furthermore
, the use
of the Internet
for educating children
has some restrictions due to
age limitations and parents should allow their adolescents to become mature to use
the Internet
. Educating beginners by using the Internet
in every lesson would appear to cause a number of risk impacts on their raising. This
leads to immaturity mislead their right way and they can not use
the internet
as well.
Turning to possible alternatives, probably the most effective would be for schools and tutors to familiarize students with the study by feasible searching instead
of using the internet
. For instance
, one of the best ways
to teach beginners is by using libraries. By this
, we mean that this
can enhance children
's knowledge with better achievement. Moreover
, another viable option is for adolescents to study with their classmates. Also
, it can help children
improve their relationships with their classmates. In addition
, it seems highly likely to lead to a better influence on youngsters.
In conclusion, it seems reasonable for schools to educate immaturity by using the internet
in their study. However
, due to
negative impacts on adolescence at a young age, need to become children
have enough knowledge and become mature.Submitted by TUTOO on
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