some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plant and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

One of the major concerns in today’s

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is damaging the environment and altering it. Some people believe that the extinction of certain species can have a detrimental impact on the ecosystem,

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some other people claim that there are more principal environmental troubles these days.

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elaborate my views for

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the impacts and

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, will lead to a logical conclusion. On the one hand, nowadays special species of herbage and creatures have been destroyed and

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has caused damage to the ecosystem and will have far-reaching implications in the future.

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the environment profound impact on the health of the whole planet including habitats, the disruption of food chains and the loss of ecosystem services that are vital for human well-being, so, these are knock-on

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effects

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on clean water, raw material, herbal medicines, the health of animals, and groundwater.

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, increasing the construction of dams obverse the rivers, a lack of tough law

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in some countries,

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reason, profiteers hunt species animals.

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sight of view feel that

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of the important environmental issues are altering the climate weather, air pollution, deforestation,

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for human beings and

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industry all around the

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.

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, not

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green technology, alternative transportation public, not

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recycle

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products.

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, a great deal of nations will be using fossil fuels.

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, they should be conscientious because they know that

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non-renewable

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of non-renewable

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energy plays a part in

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life

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. In conclusion, from my viewpoint, both these positions are to excess major in our life and future

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, These are our tasks to care

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environment.

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communities have

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stop the damaging habitat and tough law enforcement coordinates about damaging

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