The chart below shows the male and female internet users aged that 15-24 in 2000.
The graph below illustrates the percentage number of men and women who used the
internet
for different missions which are Social networks ,Online shopping, Email as well and other Use synonyms
activities
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also
,the people between the ages of 15 to 24.Linking Words
Moreover
,it was in the year 2000.
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Overall
, the amount of ladies who used the Linking Words
internet
for sending Emails was more whilst the gents were fewer.Use synonyms
Additionally
, a lot of boys participated in the use of Linking Words
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Internet
for Other Add an article
the Internet
activities
compared to the girls.
A lot of men accessed the web for Social networks Use synonyms
in contrast
the girls were less.Linking Words
Furthermore
,both males and females who gained access to the Linking Words
internet
for Online shopping were a smaller amount.Again, the boy's percentage was below the girl's percentage.
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In addition
,the ladies who used the Linking Words
internet
for Other Use synonyms
activities
and Emails were more than the gents.Use synonyms
Besides
,neither the boys nor the girls who used the web for other Linking Words
activities
were above twenty per cent.Use synonyms
Also
, the amount of people who used the Linking Words
internet
for emails for both ladies and gents was a lot.Use synonyms
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