There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming, and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being. What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?
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a major
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in future because the crude oil is too costly.
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. Increasing road taxes on people with more than two cars, and road pricing schemes such
as a traffic congestion charge during peak traffic times would reduce the number of non-essential car
journeys and encourage people to use
other forms of transport such
as buses.
In conclusion, while
car
emissions are a growing threat to both the health of the planet and individuals, electrifying cars, mass transportation systems, and traffic management programs can help to
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