You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: say where you are going, describe your home explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear _________,
Dear Felycia,
How are you,
Felycia
? I hope you are fine and healthy.
I writing Correct your spelling
Felicia
this
letter because l
need your help to look my
Change preposition
at my
house
while
l
go on holiday next summer with my family. I will go to Japan during
1 Change preposition
from
june
until 9 Change the capitalization
June
june
. Change the capitalization
June
Moreover
, it is the first l
Add a missing verb
have travel
travel
to Japan, and Replace the word
travelled
l
go to
with my family, so Verb problem
am going
l
am very happy.
My house
is located near Losari Beach which is near your house
too. My house
just have
1 floor which is Change the verb form
has
small
Add an article
a small
house
because it just have
one kitchen, two bedrooms, one living room, and two toilets. My Change the verb form
has
house
also
have
a garden which is my favorite place at home.
I just need your help to look Change the verb form
has
my
Change preposition
at my
house
two times in one week because my house
area is quite dangerous. Futhermore
, CCTV's Correct your spelling
Furthermore
house
is broken and Lock
door security is broken too. I Correct article usage
the Lock
also
need your help to check the doors and windows still
locked and Add a missing verb
are still
close
. If you don't mind, Replace the word
closed
l
neee
your help to water my plant outside my Correct your spelling
need
house
.
I hope you have a
time to look Change the article
apply
my
Change preposition
at my
house
and willing
to help me. If you have free time, we can meet after my holiday. Thank you Add a missing verb
are willing
Felycia
.
Best regards,
Andrianto RaharjaCorrect your spelling
Felicia
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents one clear idea or topic and transitions smoothly into the next, maintaining a coherent flow throughout the letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
Include a proper greeting and closing, as they are important for formal correspondence, and be careful with casual language and expressions.
Task Achievement
Address all parts of the prompt with sufficient detail. Each request should be clearly and fully explained, ensuring that the response is complete and informative.
Task Achievement
Adopt a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter, which should reflect the formal nature of the writing task and the relationship with the recipient.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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