Medical services should be run by profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is often argued that the medical industry ought to be run by private corporate enterprises. I strongly disagree with
this
statement because there are several reasons Linking Words
such
as medical costs will be expensive and Linking Words
medicare
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insurance
prices will be increased. Use synonyms
This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To commence with, medical services should not be taken over by profit-making Linking Words
companies
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treatment
costs will be expensive as compared to before Use synonyms
due to
private Linking Words
companies
focusing only on earning more profits rather than serving people and treating diseases without profits. Use synonyms
Consequently
, rich persons can only afford a better quality of medical service than poor Linking Words
folks
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due to
expensive. Linking Words
For example
, the wealthy population have a chance to increase life expectancy by getting better Linking Words
treatment
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in contrast
, the poor Linking Words
folks
cannot afford the high cost of medical services. Use synonyms
Thus
, a huge gap might be created between the affluent families and the underprivileged families. Ergo, I strongly agree that private organisations should not run the medical field.
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Moreover
, when a private enterprise runs a medical field Linking Words
medicare
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insurance
's price peaks as compared to before because they have to earn more profits rather than doing service to the population. Meanwhile, third-party Use synonyms
insurance
's monthly due amount is high but the Use synonyms
insurance
will not cover all medical expenses when the profit-making organisation runs the medical service. Use synonyms
For instance
, American Linking Words
Medicare
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Insurance
Company is a private company-based enterprise, the third-party Use synonyms
insurance
amount is high, so only rich people can afford and use it, on the other side, poor Use synonyms
folks
cannot buy third-party Use synonyms
insurance
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due to
expensive. Linking Words
Hence
, the private Linking Words
companies
should not be taken over the medical Use synonyms
sector
.
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To conclude
, certainly, the medical Linking Words
sector
ought not to be run by profit-making Use synonyms
companies
because rich Use synonyms
folks
can only get better Use synonyms
treatment
than the poor population Use synonyms
due to
the high cost of medical Linking Words
treatment
, the third-party Use synonyms
medicare
cost is expensive, so all people cannot buy Use synonyms
insurance
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I strongly disagree with that the private Linking Words
companies
should not run the medical Use synonyms
sector
. I hope the public Use synonyms
sector
will be taken over Use synonyms
this
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instead
of private ones.Linking Words
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