Medical services should be run by profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is often argued that the medical industry ought to be run by private corporate enterprises. I strongly disagree with
this
statement because there are several reasons
such
as medical costs will be expensive and
medicare
insurance
prices will be increased.
This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, medical services should not be taken over by profit-making
companies
because
treatment
costs will be expensive as compared to before
due to
private
companies
focusing only on earning more profits rather than serving people and treating diseases without profits.
Consequently
, rich persons can only afford a better quality of medical service than poor
folks
due to
expensive.
For example
, the wealthy population have a chance to increase life expectancy by getting better
treatment
,
in contrast
, the poor
folks
cannot afford the high cost of medical services.
Thus
, a huge gap might be created between the affluent families and the underprivileged families. Ergo, I strongly agree that private organisations should not run the medical field.
Moreover
, when a private enterprise runs a medical field
medicare
insurance
's price peaks as compared to before because they have to earn more profits rather than doing service to the population. Meanwhile, third-party
insurance
's monthly due amount is high but the
insurance
will not cover all medical expenses when the profit-making organisation runs the medical service.
For instance
, American
Medicare
Insurance
Company is a private company-based enterprise, the third-party
insurance
amount is high, so only rich people can afford and use it, on the other side, poor
folks
cannot buy third-party
insurance
due to
expensive.
Hence
, the private
companies
should not be taken over the medical
sector
.
To conclude
, certainly, the medical
sector
ought not to be run by profit-making
companies
because rich
folks
can only get better
treatment
than the poor population
due to
the high cost of medical
treatment
, the third-party
medicare
cost is expensive, so all people cannot buy
insurance
.
Therefore
, I strongly disagree with that the private
companies
should not run the medical
sector
. I hope the public
sector
will be taken over
this
field
instead
of private ones.
Submitted by reanudeepan on

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