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This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
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The graph provides data about the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
Overall
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, in all
years
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 the highest recycling
rate
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 had paper and cardboard and the lowest recycling
rate
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 had plastics. As can clearly be seen, in all
years
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 the highest recycling
rate
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 had paper and cardboard.
Initially
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, the
rate
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 was approximately 65 per
cent
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. Its peak was in 1994 when the proportion of paper and cardboard was 80 per
cent
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. After 1994 the
rate
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 started to decrease and in 2010 the
rate
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 was 70 per
cent
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. The
rate
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 of glass containers in 1982 was 50 per
cent
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. From 1982 to 1990 the
rate
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 dropped,
however
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 after that the
rate
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 started to rise and in 2020 was its peak
with
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 60 per
cent
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. In 1986 recycling
rate
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 for aluminum cans was more or less 5 per
cent
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 over the
years
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 the
rate
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 abruptly increased and in 2010 the
rate
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 was roughly 45 per
cent
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.
Recycling
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The recycling
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rate
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 for plastics started in 1990 the proportion was less than 5 per
cent
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. Even though it rose over the
years
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 it had the lowest recycling
rate
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 compared to other materials.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, rate, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • percentage
  • paper and cardboard
  • glass
  • plastic
  • metal
  • stable
  • noticeable
  • rise
  • significant increase
  • accounting for
  • consistent
  • ste steadily
  • dramatically
  • nearly
  • worth noting
  • relatively low
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