The chart shows striking differences in the level of computer and Internet penetration in the Arab world. Write a report describing the information in the graph below.

The chart shows striking differences in the level of computer and Internet penetration in the Arab world.

Write a report describing the information in the graph below.
The chart shows striking differences in the level of computer and
Internet
penetration in the Arab world. The
UAE
and
Kuwait
are by far the most computerized
countries
, with
Lebanon
a distant third. The
UAE
has over 150
computers
for every 1000 inhabitants, compared to
Kuwait
’s 130 and
Lebanon
’s 60.
In contrast
,
countries
such
as Egypt, Morocco and Syria have less than 20
computers
per 1000 inhabitants. There are
also
great differences in
Internet
use
and availability. The
UAE
has by far the highest proportion of
users
, with more than one-third of its population using the
Internet
.
Kuwait
and
Lebanon
are second and third again, with 100
users
per
thousand
in
Kuwait
and 80 in
Lebanon
. In some
countries
the
number
using the
Internet
is negligible: Saudi Arabia has less than 20
users
per
thousand
, and there are fewer than 5
users
per
thousand
in Syria. One unusual feature of the graph is that
Internet
use
does not seem to be directly related to the
number
of
computers
. In several
countries
(the
UAE
,
Lebanon
, Jordan and Oman), there are more
Internet
users
per
thousand
people than
computers
.
However
, in other
countries
,
such
as
Kuwait
, Saudi Arabia and Syria, the
number
of
Internet
users
is lower than the
number
of
computers
. In summary, there are major differences between computer
use
and
Internet
use
in the Arab world, but the
UAE
clearly leads the area in both
number
Correct article usage
the number
show examples
of
computers
and
number
Change the article
a number
the number
show examples
of
internet
Capitalize word
Internet
show examples
users
per
capital
Correct your spelling
capita
show examples
.
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