The chart shows striking differences in the level of computer and Internet penetration in the Arab world. Write a report describing the information in the graph below.
The chart shows striking differences in the level of computer and
Internet
penetration in the Arab world.
The UAE
and Kuwait
are by far the most computerized countries
, with Lebanon
a distant third. The UAE
has over 150 computers
for every 1000 inhabitants, compared to Kuwait
’s 130 and Lebanon
’s 60. In contrast
, countries
such
as Egypt, Morocco and Syria have less than 20 computers
per 1000 inhabitants.
There are also
great differences in Internet
use
and availability. The UAE
has by far the highest proportion of users
, with more than one-third of its population using the Internet
. Kuwait
and Lebanon
are second and third again, with 100 users
per thousand
in Kuwait
and 80 in Lebanon
. In some countries
the number
using the Internet
is negligible: Saudi Arabia has less than 20 users
per thousand
, and there are fewer than 5 users
per thousand
in Syria.
One unusual feature of the graph is that Internet
use
does not seem to be directly related to the number
of computers
. In several countries
(the UAE
, Lebanon
, Jordan and Oman), there are more Internet
users
per thousand
people than computers
. However
, in other countries
, such
as Kuwait
, Saudi Arabia and Syria, the number
of Internet
users
is lower than the number
of computers
.
In summary, there are major differences between computer use
and Internet
use
in the Arab world, but the UAE
clearly leads the area in both number
of Correct article usage
the number
computers
and number
of Change the article
a number
the number
internet
Capitalize word
Internet
users
per capital
.Correct your spelling
capita
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