The chart shows striking differences in the level of computer and Internet penetration in the Arab world. Write a report describing the information in the graph below.
The chart shows striking differences in the level of computer and
Internet
penetration in the Arab world.
The Use synonyms
UAE
and Use synonyms
Kuwait
are by far the most computerized Use synonyms
countries
, with Use synonyms
Lebanon
a distant third. The Use synonyms
UAE
has over 150 Use synonyms
computers
for every 1000 inhabitants, compared to Use synonyms
Kuwait
’s 130 and Use synonyms
Lebanon
’s 60. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
countries
Use synonyms
such
as Egypt, Morocco and Syria have less than 20 Linking Words
computers
per 1000 inhabitants.
There are Use synonyms
also
great differences in Linking Words
Internet
Use synonyms
use
and availability. The Use synonyms
UAE
has by far the highest proportion of Use synonyms
users
, with more than one-third of its population using the Use synonyms
Internet
. Use synonyms
Kuwait
and Use synonyms
Lebanon
are second and third again, with 100 Use synonyms
users
per Use synonyms
thousand
in Use synonyms
Kuwait
and 80 in Use synonyms
Lebanon
. In some Use synonyms
countries
the Use synonyms
number
using the Use synonyms
Internet
is negligible: Saudi Arabia has less than 20 Use synonyms
users
per Use synonyms
thousand
, and there are fewer than 5 Use synonyms
users
per Use synonyms
thousand
in Syria.
One unusual feature of the graph is that Use synonyms
Internet
Use synonyms
use
does not seem to be directly related to the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
computers
. In several Use synonyms
countries
(the Use synonyms
UAE
, Use synonyms
Lebanon
, Jordan and Oman), there are more Use synonyms
Internet
Use synonyms
users
per Use synonyms
thousand
people than Use synonyms
computers
. Use synonyms
However
, in other Linking Words
countries
, Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
Kuwait
, Saudi Arabia and Syria, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
Internet
Use synonyms
users
is lower than the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
computers
.
In summary, there are major differences between computer Use synonyms
use
and Use synonyms
Internet
Use synonyms
use
in the Arab world, but the Use synonyms
UAE
clearly leads the area in both Use synonyms
Use synonyms
number
of Correct article usage
the number
computers
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
Use synonyms
internet
Capitalize word
Internet
users
per Use synonyms
capital
.Correct your spelling
capita
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