The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The chart shows the Southland's main exports over the period of 25
years
. It distinguishes the 3 main
products
namely, international
tourism
,
dairy
products
, and meat
products
. The
export
transactions
is
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measured in billions. In detail, International
tourism
and
dairy
products
seem to have
the
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been the
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most sought
out
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apply
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products
in
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throughout the
years
with international
tourism
valuing
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at 8
billion
in 2000, 8.9
billion
in
the
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2020, and prospectively gaining an increase to 9.9
billion
by 2025. Meanwhile,
export
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exports
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of
dairy
products
seem to be going well too with
7billion
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7 billion
in 2000, skyrocketing to 9.9
billion
in 2020, with a slight decrease of 2
billion
by 2025. The
export
of meat
products
seem
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seems
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to have gradually decreased from 2000-2025 since
export
value went from
6billion
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6 billion
in 2000,
5.7
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to 5.7
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billion
in 2020, and later
on
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apply
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decreasing
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to 5
billion
by 2025.
Overall
, the chart has shown a consistent growth of international
tourism
as its
export
value
have
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has
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gradually increased throughout the
years
while
the demand for
dairy
and meat
products
seem
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seems
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to be falling as their
export
value
have
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has
show examples
been
dimishing
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diminishing
throughout the
years
.
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