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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows the Southland's main exports over the period of 25
years
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. It distinguishes the 3 main
products
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 namely, international
tourism
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,
dairy
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products
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, and meat
products
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. The
export
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 transactions
is
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 measured in billions. In detail, International
tourism
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 and
dairy
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products
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 seem to have
the
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been the
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 most sought
out
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apply
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products
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in
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throughout the
years
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 with international
tourism
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valuing
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 at 8
billion
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 in 2000, 8.9
billion
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 in
the
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2020, and prospectively gaining an increase to 9.9
billion
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 by 2025. Meanwhile,
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export
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exports
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 of
dairy
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products
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 seem to be going well too with
7billion
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7 billion
 in 2000, skyrocketing to 9.9
billion
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 in 2020, with a slight decrease of 2
billion
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 by 2025. The
export
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 of meat
products
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seem
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 to have gradually decreased from 2000-2025 since
export
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 value went from
6billion
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6 billion
 in 2000,
5.7
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to 5.7
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billion
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 in 2020, and later
on
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decreasing
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decreased
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 to 5
billion
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 by 2025.
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, the chart has shown a consistent growth of international
tourism
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 as its
export
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 value
have
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 gradually increased throughout the
years
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while
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 the demand for
dairy
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 and meat
products
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seem
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 to be falling as their
export
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 value
have
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has
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 been
dimishing
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diminishing
 throughout the
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, products, tourism, dairy, export, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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