The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph provides information about the
prices
(US $ per kg
) of banana
in four Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
countries
such
as Japan
,France
,Germany
and USA
from 1994 to 2004.
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the USA
Overall
,Japan
and USA
after having some fluctuations in Correct article usage
the USA
prices
of Correct article usage
the prices
bananas
experienced an upward tend
,Correct your spelling
trend
while
other
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in other
countries
such
as France
and Germany
selling Change noun form
Germany's
price
decreased a little bit in the end.
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prices
To begin
with,In 1994 1 kg
of bananas
costed
approximately 1.8$ in Correct your spelling
cost
Japan
which was almost 20cents
more than the price in Correct your spelling
20 cents
France
in the same year .In terms ofCorrect article usage
the
princes
of Correct your spelling
price
bananas
in remained
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the remaining
countries
,was
around 1,4$ and 0,9$ respectively.In the next year,Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Japan
and USA
displayed a significant increase in bananas
prices
to almost 3$ and 1.2$,while
in Germany
the cost of bananas
per kg
declined slightly to 1.3$.Until 2001 Japan
was the leader of the most expensive bananas
amoung
Correct your spelling
among
this
four Correct determiner usage
these
countries
,nevertheless
,in 2001 the price of bananas
surpassed Japan
and was its
highest point(around Change preposition
at its
1.7$per
Correct your spelling
1.7$ per
kg
)in that year.However
,Japan
undertook France
in the prices
of bananas
and stayed on top over the years.Lastly
,the prices
of bananas
in Germany
and in USA
Correct article usage
the USA
was
in the vicinity of 1$ and 1.5$ Correct subject-verb agreement
were
in
the end of the period.Change the preposition
at
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