Water pollution has been an increasing problem over the last few decades . what causes water pllution? How can we prevent the problem ?
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last
few decades,The contamination of water
has been increasing.This
is a serious issue which is
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concerned
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concerns
by
everyone.These are two problems of Change preposition
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the
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water
pollution
,One is Correct article usage
the
an
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the
industries
sector and Correct article usage
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wastage
wastages
.During Fix the agreement mistake
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the causes and Remove the preposition
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solution
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essay.
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with,an industries
waste oil is directly Change noun form
industry's
disposing
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disposed
to
the rivers and seas.During Change preposition
of in
this
activity
the Add a comma
activity,
water
is being polluting
more and the sea Change the verb form
is being polluted
is polluting
creatures
life Change noun form
creatures'
creature's
also
affecting
.The same Wrong verb form
affected
water
only getting getting
fish for Remove the redundancy
apply
the
human foods.It occurs both the same.Next,Correct article usage
apply
People
are putting waste chemical particles into the water
.It has high toxic level
to affect the Fix the agreement mistake
levels
environment
condition.Replace the word
environmental
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,rain
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in
water
cycling method the Correct article usage
the water
water
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other
cloud
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clouds
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drops
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acid rain Correct article usage
apply
water
.In this
condition
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condition,
get
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the
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.These reasons may Fix the agreement mistake
colds
occurs
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occur
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the next paragraph.
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Therefore
there are two conditions to prevent the
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apply
water
pollution
.In first
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the first
method
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method,
industries
should be audit
by the Wrong verb form
audited
governement
.Correct your spelling
government
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taking this
type of action the occuring
will Correct your spelling
occurring
be stop
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be stopped
then
the filteration
process to Correct your spelling
filtration
be do
the same.Emerging to all factories for making the process to audit yearly once.As are result the Change the verb form
do
accurance
value of Correct your spelling
accuracy
water
pollution
is to be reduced.Secondly
,the chemical wastages must be segragate
and Correct your spelling
segregated
segregate
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disposed
dispose
it properly.Government should monitoring and who polluting the Add the preposition
dispose of
water
they could take a
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apply
seviour
action.Correct your spelling
serious
saviour
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should aware
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be aware
about
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of
this
problem to reduce
.Correct pronoun usage
reduce it
Moreover
the rules and regulations Add a comma
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is
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are
folloed
by the Correct your spelling
followed
people
and this
water
pollution
is never be happened.As a
result
there is good environment and Add a comma
result,
water
pollution
to be avoided.If the process is doing
frequently the Wrong verb form
done
water
pollution
will eject.
At
my conclusion Change preposition
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point
the cause of Verb problem
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the
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water
pollution
is to be avoided by taking some measures.This
to
be Add a missing verb
is to
control
and Wrong verb form
controlled
monitor
by the government Wrong verb form
monitored
also
inspecting an
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apply
industries
and our people
.They will adhere the
function.Change preposition
to the
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