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The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling from 2011 to 2015.

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling from 2011 to 2015.
The
bart
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 chart illustrates
waste
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the waste
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 of 5 different types of collection by
a
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recycling (
paper
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 ,
glas
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glass
, tins and garden) between 2011 to 2015.
Overal
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,
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paper
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 reached a
peack
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peak
at
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of
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 70 in 2015.
wheare as
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whereas
,
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garder
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garter
 hit a bottom out at 15% in 2012 and had a
flactuating
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fluctuating
 trend from 2011 to 2015. In terms of 2011 and 2012, the differences between goods
trend
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 were minimal.
Paper
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 made up 57 of
paper
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 in 57 and in the next year
paper
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 was 50. and it had a
steadily
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 increase except in 2012. glass was
second
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the second
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 main tons of waste in the given period. Another thing to consider is
garden
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the garden
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 that was
comrised
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comprised
 negligible part of tones of
wast
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waste
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 in 5 years. Tins saw a significant decrease from 2011 to 2012 , and it
was
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eventually declined
at
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 39 in 2015.
howevere
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however
, it remained around stable in 2013 and 2014.

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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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