The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world can not be learned at a university or any other academic. To what extend do you agree or disagree

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qualities

and

skills

becoming more popular

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others

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matter. There is a widespread belief that

universities

or any other academic institutions can not teach

this

personal

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. I firmly agree

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one and In

this

essay, I will discuss about positive aspects.

On the other hand

, critics may point out some drawbacks,

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they might

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that academic

institutes

are the best sectors to

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qualities

and

skills

. As an example, most of the main

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handle

ededucated

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educated

dedicated

people. They become successful step and step using their academic knowledge.

According to

my point,

universities

and other

institutes

far

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are far

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away from teaching

qualities

and

skills

.

For instance

, there

are

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huge academic homework and syllabus to do.

Then

children

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not time to develop their abilities. They always try to pass

exam

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and do

academic related

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things.

Furthermore

,

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academic syllabus

which is

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not

updated

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been updated

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for many years. Every year teach

same

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things.

This

is clear that if children want to be

success

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using

qualities

and

skills

, they will have to choose another

own

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path

instead

of

universities

and academic

institutes

.

To sum up

, academic

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include

universities

not

alallowed

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allowed

to give

qualities

and

skills

.

Although

people

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using abilities,it is not permanent. I believe people can learn

qualities

and

skills

through their own fashion.