Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, there has been a tremendous increase in the number of individuals questioning whether the

economic

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economy

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is a true representative of the

country

’s progression.

While

some may feel that

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success

is the outermost level of

acheivement

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achievement

. Others, including myself, strongly oppose

this

view and believe that other criteria

such

as

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social integrity and

technology

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technological

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advancement aspects are equally important.

To begin

, there is an argument to be made that some governments focus only on the

economical

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statistics to judge

on

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their development.

For example

, The United States is considered to be the most powerful

country

in the world and many other countries fall under their control, simply because they have the strongest economy and highest share of gold worldwide.

For

this

reason, it is evident that power is granted

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countries that have solid financial grounds, without which they have no global impact and someone else controls them. What is more, many of these governments which are financially stable have offered

high

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quality of living for their citizens, which clearly depicts that

economy

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has helped them to establish well-being for society.

This

being the case, it can be assumed that if the

country

had weak

economical

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growth,

this

would elaborate the reason for low standards of living.

Nonetheless

, it must be stated that opponents to

this

theory believe in the necessity of

the

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social relationships and advanced technology for the

country

to thrive.

For instance

,

Japanese

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population has invented robots to analyse the financial difficulties of the population and find solutions for them, which inevitably has reduced the poverty rate by one-third in the

last

5 years.

Therefore

,

it is clear that

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developing the technological resources of the

country

is beneficial, clearly

due to

their integrative usage with

the

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human intelligence to facilitate the room for

success

.

Furthermore

, the unity between people and strong social communication will drive the entire community toward working together to build a more

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future, which lead to

stronger

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economy

as a result

. With

this

in mind, there is no doubt that if

government

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reconsider the definition of

success

in the

country

,

this

would help everyone to progress and improve the

overall

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growth.

To conclude

,

while

some may argue that economics play the most important factor in deciding on the

country

’s

success

. Others, myself included, hold the view that there are other factors to assess

precisly

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precisely

this

goal. From my perspective, it is very essential to tackle the

country

as one

unity

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instead

of focusing on one area and

neglegt

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neglect

the others.