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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows how much money was earned by Southland transporting three different objects
in
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from
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 2000 to 2023 and future plans in 2025.
Overall
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, it should be noted that meat
products
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 generated the lowest revenues in all years and every year got minor,
while
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, international tourism made
biggest
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the biggest
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 financial
values
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value
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, except in 2023
that
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the
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 outcomes of
dairy
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products
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 transcended. In 2000, no group were as profitable as international tourism, it was above $8 billion (
b
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) respectively, but, in 2023, it
was
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did
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 not
created
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create
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a
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apply
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financial growth like
dairy
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products
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 and merely became near $9b. In 2000, we should
be
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have
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 marked,
dairy
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products
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 in second
garde
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grade
approximately
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at approximately
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 $7b,
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, in 2023, that made a significant economic growth to $10b. Future exportation
scheme
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schemes
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 in 2025, for both of
these
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these,
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 will increase earnings of international tourism to $10b and decrease
dairy
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products
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just
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by just
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 about $500 thousand to $9.5b .
In addition
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, meat
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products profit
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product profits
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were fell
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fell
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down
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apply
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year by year.
Chart
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The chart
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 showed in 2000, meat
products
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 gained $6b, in 2023, turned to $5.5b and in the future will become just $5b.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, dairy, b with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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