The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The bar chart shows how much money was earned by Southland transporting three different objects
in
2000 to 2023 and future plans in 2025.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, it should be noted that meat products
generated the lowest revenues in all years and every year got minor, while
, international tourism made biggest
financial Correct article usage
the biggest
values
, except in 2023 Fix the agreement mistake
value
that
outcomes of Correct determiner usage
the
dairy
products
transcended.
In 2000, no group were as profitable as international tourism, it was above $8 billion (b
) respectively, but, in 2023, it was
not Verb problem
did
created
Wrong verb form
create
a
financial growth like Correct article usage
apply
dairy
products
and merely became near $9b. In 2000, we should be
marked, Verb problem
have
dairy
products
in second garde
Correct your spelling
grade
approximately
$7b, Change preposition
at approximately
However
, in 2023, that made a significant economic growth to $10b. Future exportation scheme
in 2025, for both of Fix the agreement mistake
schemes
these
will increase earnings of international tourism to $10b and decrease Add the comma(s)
these,
dairy
products
just
about $500 thousand to $9.5b .
Change preposition
by just
In addition
, meat products profit
Fix the agreement mistake
product profits
were fell
Change the verb form
fell
down
year by year. Change preposition
apply
Chart
showed in 2000, meat Add an article
The chart
products
gained $6b, in 2023, turned to $5.5b and in the future will become just $5b.Submitted by kim on
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