Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from thoir choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals argue that it is feasible to guess someone's
culture
from the way they select their clothes
. I disagree with this
argument in today's fast-paced world
.
In the past, clothing provide
Change the verb form
provides
with
a Change preposition
apply
high value
position in some Add a hyphen
high-value
cultures
. Furthermore
, in some cultures
and religions people
tried to follow their particular dress codes or even show their culture
by presenting a symbol on their clothing. For instance
, hijab in Muslims, some local dress of specific cultures
especially from Asia or Africa, and even hats among Jewish people
. Indeed, people
tried to demonstrate their links to an
Correct article usage
a
especial
Correct your spelling
special
culture
by choosing some clothes
as a symbol of their cultures
.
Fix the agreement mistake
culture
However
, in today's world
which fast fashions
influenced lots of Fix the agreement mistake
fashion
people
, it is not common to see someone with the
cultural clothing. In fact, more individuals, Correct article usage
apply
young
generation Add an article
the young
in particular
, try to follow new trends in clothing and look like their role models. For example
, jeans and T-shirts are the most popular combination these days which is seen all over the world
. Needless to say, the consumption culture
with the help of advertising in medias
, which make huge money Correct your spelling
media
turn over
for some companies, Correct your spelling
turnover
find
Correct subject-verb agreement
finds
their
way among Correct pronoun usage
its
people
and tries to show the cultural links clothing
as an old-fashion.
In conclusion, I think the days of demonstrating the Change preposition
to clothing
culture
by choosing special clothes
are over and new trends are became
popular all over the Change the verb form
are becoming
world
. So, I believe it is hard to talk about someone's culture
by
their Change preposition
through
clothes
nowadays which
the most Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
wearing
the same Wrong verb form
wear
clothes
.Submitted by ali on
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