Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, Technology has become a role of vitally important for people because it can support

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daily activities

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as working and studying. In the following paragraphs, from my point of view, personally, I entirely believe that it is a positive development because of some reasons. One of the major reasons is that

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the employer provides the field job like sector freelance for the employee.

This

is because some individuals find that they are more productive when working from

home

. With fewer distractions and interruptions, they can often focus better and accomplish more in less time.

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, in the capital city of Indonesia,

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Jakarta,

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number of freelancers,

such

as writers, designers, or programmers, thrive in a

home

environment. They appreciate the flexibility to create their own schedules and the absence of office distractions, allowing them to focus on their work and deliver high-quality results efficiently. Another reason is that it allows the children

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to access a variety of resources. The internet provides a vast array of educational resources, from interactive learning platforms to virtual libraries. Children can explore diverse subjects, access multimedia content, and engage with interactive tools that cater to different learning styles.

This

access to resources can enrich their learning experience and broaden their knowledge.

To sum up

, it seems to me that the affordability and increased accessibility of technology may increase

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of adults globally

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from

home

and

also

youngsters are starting to learn from

home

. Regarding

this

,

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stand point

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of view, it is a positive development as it can be impactful for work performance without any interruption and might build a pleasant atmosphere and for developing of

youngsters

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mindset in obtaining something unfamiliar on

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