The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts provide data about the ways of accessing the
news
in Canada
and Australia
.
Overall
, in Canada
the main source of accessing the Add a comma
Canada,
news
is TV
, whereas
in Australia
the main source of accessing the news
is online.
As can clearly be seen, the main sources of accessing the news
in Canada
are TV
with
40 per Change preposition
at
cent
and Online with
36 per Change preposition
at
cent
. After TV
and news
come Print( 14 per cent
) and radio(7 per cent
). 3 per cent
of accessing the news
in Canada
is not specified.
Turning to Australia
, the main sources of accessing the news
in Australia
are Online the rate is 52 per cent
and TV
which has 37 per cent
. After that comes print which has 7 per cent
. 2 per cent
of people in Australia
get information on radio. 2 per cent
of accessing the news
in Australia
is not specified.Submitted by tmargaryan2006 on
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