the graph below shows unemployment levels in Ireland and the number of people leaving the country between 1988 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature of the graph and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram above depicts information regarding the
number
of inhabitants leaving Ireland as well as
the unemployment rate of the nation.
1988 witnessed a high start of the total citizens
that Correct quantifier usage
number of citizens
leave
the country, which stood Wrong verb form
left
in
around 6000 individuals. Reflecting similar trends, the level of unemployment Change preposition
at
also
experienced a peak start of above 16 per cent
of the total residents. As years went by, both no-job townsman
and people leaving Ireland Fix the agreement mistake
townsmen
continue
to diminish their Wrong verb form
continued
number
with light fluctuations.
On one
hand, the figure of people that went abroad dropped to under 40000 in 1992. Correct article usage
the one
Furthermore
, it slightly increased in a 2-year period before gradually decreased
its Wrong verb form
decreasing
number
until 2004. Moreover
, a significant raise
to 50000 residents happened from 2004 to 2008.
Correct your spelling
rise
On the other hand
, the unemployement
proportion fell to around 13 per Correct your spelling
unemployment
cent
before it rose to above 14 per cent
in two years. The figures cumulatively lessen to a considerably small number
in 2000. By then
, the share remained steady until it increased vaguely to 6 per cent
by the year of 2008.Submitted by jelitasofiaz on
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