The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about a university library.

The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about a university library.
The depicted pie charts indicate the variety of
books
and the proportion of non-printed
books
in a certain library based on the comments of undergraduate and postgraduate
students
.
Overall
, a glance at the illustration reveals that the majority of postgraduate and graduate
students
were happy with the range of
books
and non-printed materials. As regards the diversity of
books
, slightly over half of the postgraduates were completely satisfied, with 55% of the total number,
this
figure for undergraduates was just a quarter, 25%. Meanwhile, a third of postgraduates were contestants, and 50% of undergraduates were satisfied.
However
, merely 12% of postgraduates complained about the variety of articles but 10% higher than
this
figure witnessed in undergraduates. When it comes to the non-printed materials, roughly half of the postgraduate
students
considered satisfied and approximately an equal volume command very good and very bad, 27% and 25% respectively. The data for undergraduate
students
were a bit different, 52% of them were totally pleased, and 23% and 25% of them recommended bad and normal responses, in order.
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