Computers have changed the way people study. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using computers as study aid?

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trends have changed significantly in recent years
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spreading
of
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computers
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the merits
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outweigh
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Immediate
and rapid
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accessibility
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one of the great clear advantages of using computers as
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study
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assistant
.
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addition
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the wide range of
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to achieve desired information is another important positive aspect of them.
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, in language learning portable
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digital
dictionaries, which are
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in coputational
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gadgets, are significantly
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useful
for language
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and
effective
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way to search
about
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the vocabulary meaning or grrammatical points in any situation.
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for example
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sience
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science
subject's
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and
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information from different
sources
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can improve the reliability and quality of information. Another
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noticeable
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advantage is that
this
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way is more
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friendly
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because
it
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paper using and
consequently
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tree cutting
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it is
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necessary
to pay
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attention
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producing and energy resources usage. Focusing on drawbacks may indicate some bad features of
this
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study
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method. For more explanation when a student
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used to
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study
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studying
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and
learn
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from
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digital format, when
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not available
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any reason for a
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vacation or electrticity cut off or no access to
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they cannot do their job easily and
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definitely
face difficulties. To
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conclude
, using computers and digital formats of educational
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are more
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interesting
to the learners, and if they use
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them correctly
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in
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manner
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will be more effective than traditional learning
sources
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