The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates

the

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how

sugar

is produced from

sugar

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the sugar

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cane

plant

.

Overall

,

it is clear that

there are seven stages of producing

sugar

, starting

by

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planting

sugar

cane

plant

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plants

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and

lastly

by

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dryling

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drying

and cooling

sugar

. Looking for more details, there are several

process

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to

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for

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producing

sugar

by

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natural

made

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and man-made.

Firtly

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Firstly

by

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natural

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naturally

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made, the farmers of

sugar

cane

plant

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plants

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are

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growled

sugar

canes

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cane

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. Continue,

sugar

care

are

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hasvested

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harvested

has vested

those

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on those

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plant

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plants

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during the period 12-18 months by truck or manually hand. Regarding

to

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the producing

sugar

cane

by man-made, the process of filtering

extrac

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extra

extract

sugar

canes

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cane

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to

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juice

are

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taked

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taken

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by machine

extrac

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extract

extra

juice. Continue to

purifying

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juice, using media likely

filteritation

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filtration

are

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to out of

extrac

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extract

limestone of

sugar

cane

. Next to

evaporator

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the evaporator

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, the liquid of

extrac

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extra

extract

sugar

cane

are

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cooked by tools.

Furthermore

, the process of

centrifuge

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are

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separated

of

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from

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syrup

to

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into

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sugar

cystails

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crystals

. And

finally

, the

sugar

are

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dried and cooled by

cooling

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a cooling

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machine.