The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps demonstrate the possible scenario with developments in the future, how the industrial area will return to a new industrial place and residential area for workers.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that the current state will be more modernized with new constructions which are schools, playgrounds, medical centres, shops and housing. The factory places will be taken over by the housing. The highway will be extended from the junction to the north part which will pass over the river.
Moreover
, the housing will be built
at the end
of the new line
while
the farmland will be smaller because of these improvements. Meanwhile, another avenue will be added from the big circle to the northwest side and the shops will be established next to
this
lane. At the same time, the medical centre will be located on the northeast side of the small junction which is located on the bottom of the town map in future. The playground will be constructed across the river and among the housing and not only
game
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a game
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place but
also
school
Correct article usage
the school
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building is going to be the end of the route which is being the right-hand side of the map.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • factory complex
  • housing area
  • infrastructure
  • transportation links
  • amenities
  • environmental sustainability
  • residential buildings
  • communal facilities
  • work-life balance
  • industrial development
  • urban planning
  • green spaces
  • employee accommodation
  • accessibility
  • layout
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