The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession
The bar chart illustrates the
comparision
of Correct your spelling
comparison
salaries
between polices
, Correct subject-verb agreement
police
nurses
, firefighters
and underground drivers
in UK
. The table displays the weekly working hours of these careers.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, the data reveals most jobs' salaries
have no obvious differences between the first year
and the third year
. The underground drivers
have the highest income and the shortest working time.
The salaries
of nurses
, firefighters
and underground drivers
only have
1,000 Verb problem
apply
pounds
higher than the first year
, and the salaries
are 18,000, 40,000 and 50,000 pounds
in their first year
. In contrast
, the polices have 2,000
salary raise after three years Correct article usage
a 2,000
work
, Change preposition
of work
the
third Correct word choice
and the
year
's wage will become 23,000 pounds
.
The underground drivers
have the highest salary, it is 51,000 pounds
in the third year
, this
number is twice more than polices
, nearly three times higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
police
nurses
and a
1,000 Correct article usage
apply
pounds
more than firefighters
. However
, their work time is 36 hours, it
is shorter than police, Correct pronoun usage
which
nurses
and firefighters
which are 40, 38 and 55 hours, respectively.Submitted by chaoweikevin on
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