You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe your new apartment invite him/her to pay a visit
Hi John,
How are you doing bro? I hope you and your family are fine, I'd like to tell you that I have moved to a new apartment in the middle of Castle Streen between the museum and the library near the commercial mall.
The reason why I left my previous flat is the new one is cheaper and
cozy
, Change the spelling
cosy
moreover
, I can commute to my work within 15 minutes. Although
the landlord has many properties and tenants to deal with, he is always understaing
and cooperative.
My new apartment is spacious with three bedrooms, one living room, and a large kitchen, I'm quite happy, I feel like it is an opportunity I can not miss. Correct your spelling
understanding
However
it doesn't have a balcony, I can still enjoy the outside view through the wide windows.
Finally
, I'd like to invite you bro
for lunch next week if you are free, I'm sure that you will endorse my opinion about the new flat when you see the facilities around the location and the features that I have now.
With all love,
AdamAdd the comma(s)
, bro,
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
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Maintain a consistent formal or informal tone throughout the letter in line with the context.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,