The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
The bar chart displays the percentile of the genders of
teachers
in six different kinds of educational levels in the UK in 2010.
Overall
, the higher the education setting, the lower the percentage of women
teachers
. Also
, the percentage of men teachers
in early educations
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compared to
women
.
The highest percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
women
teachers
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, as well as the largest gap between male and female teachers,
as well as
the largest gap between male and female teachers
had been in Nursery/ pre-school
with more than 95 and respectively, the lowest Correct your spelling
preschool
percent
of men Change the spelling
per cent
teachers
are in this
category with less than 5. The data for primary school were roughly the same as pre-school. In secondary school, women
teachers
were slightly more than men. However
, in college, they reached an equal percentile
.
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university
, there were more male Fix the agreement mistake
universities
teachers
than female ones. In the former, the teachers
percentage reached Change to a genitive case
teacher's
teachers'
of
around 60 for Change preposition
apply
male
and 40 for Fix the agreement mistake
males
femal
. Correct your spelling
female
females
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, in the later
, it peaked for male Correct your spelling
latter
teachers
of around 70 and 30 for female.Submitted by AUser on
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