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The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the proportion of
sales
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 from three various kinds of
books
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 from 2002 until 2006 in a country.
Overall
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, the number of children's book
sales
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 increased steadily and it has the highest
sales
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 compared to the remaining genre of
books
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. In another way,
adult
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fiction
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 and educational book
sales
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 fluctuated every year. In 2002,
adult
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fiction
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books
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 had the most amount of
sales
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 over forty
million
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dollars
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,
similarly
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 followed by children's
books
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 with over 30
million
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dollars
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 in profit. Educational
books
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 have the lowest demand amongst the two other genres of
books
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 which only got just below 30
million
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dollars
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. Starting in 2003 children's
books
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 have had stable growth overtook
adult
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fiction
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 to experience massive
sales
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 and exceeded more than 40
million
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dollars
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 in the next 3 years. Unfortunately,
adult
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fiction
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sales
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 dropped in 2003 which was approximately only 38
million
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dollars
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. Between 2003 and 2006
adult
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fiction
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 back to increased by 40
million
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dollars
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 before the
sales
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 dramatically drowned in the number 30
million
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dollars
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. Educational
books
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 never surpassed 32
million
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dollars
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 in
sales
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, but they did not ever have a massive decrease and just fluctuated steadily.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, books, adult, fiction, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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