The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational

books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting

 and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the proportion of
sales
from three various kinds of
books
from 2002 until 2006 in a country.
Overall
, the number of children's book
sales
increased steadily and it has the highest
sales
compared to the remaining genre of
books
. In another way,
adult
fiction
and educational book
sales
fluctuated every year. In 2002,
adult
fiction
books
had the most amount of
sales
over forty
million
dollars
,
similarly
followed by children's
books
with over 30
million
dollars
in profit. Educational
books
have the lowest demand amongst the two other genres of
books
which only got just below 30
million
dollars
. Starting in 2003 children's
books
have had stable growth overtook
adult
fiction
to experience massive
sales
and exceeded more than 40
million
dollars
in the next 3 years. Unfortunately,
adult
fiction
sales
dropped in 2003 which was approximately only 38
million
dollars
. Between 2003 and 2006
adult
fiction
back to increased by 40
million
dollars
before the
sales
dramatically drowned in the number 30
million
dollars
. Educational
books
never surpassed 32
million
dollars
in
sales
, but they did not ever have a massive decrease and just fluctuated steadily.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, books, adult, fiction, million, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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