The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
The graph illustrates the number of
women
and men tutors in six different categories of educational levels in the
uk
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UK
in 2010.
Overal
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, the percentage of females in nursery, primary and secondary school is significantly higher than that of male teachers
whereas
that of males is just over that of
women
in college, private training
institute
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and
university
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. The number of men teachers is double more than that of
women
in university with about 70%,
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% respectively
while
in college the proportion is equal. In pre-school
women
are 90% more than males. Men are approximately 15% less than
women
in secondary school.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational settings
  • percentage
  • representation
  • disparities
  • predominance
  • gender imbalance
  • societal expectations
  • historical roles
  • implications
  • trends
  • gender gap
  • educational outcomes
  • gender stereotypes
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • perceptions
  • effectiveness
  • primary school
  • secondary school
  • nursery
  • university
  • further education
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