The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

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The graph illustrates the number of

women

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and men tutors in six different categories of educational levels in the

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in 2010.

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, the percentage of females in nursery, primary and secondary school is significantly higher than that of male teachers

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that of males is just over that of

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in college, private training

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and

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. The number of men teachers is double more than that of

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in university with about 70%,

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and 30

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% respectively

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in college the proportion is equal. In pre-school

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are 90% more than males. Men are approximately 15% less than

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in secondary school.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

102 words

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educational settings
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gender imbalance
societal expectations
historical roles
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The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

Should hunting be considered a sport? Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. What are the reasons for this trend? And what possible solutions could reduce this issue?

In many countries government are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money.

Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.