Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

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It is true that the amount of

waste

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production is increasing day-to-day,

due to

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overpopulation and overconsumption.

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, some argue a huge proportion of domestic

waste

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can be

recyled

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recycled

and reused through setting regulations and rules. I agree that obligation is an effective method but considering other remedies

such

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as education and reward

system

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systems

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have at least the same impact.

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with, legislation and enforcement

offers

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offer

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authorities to tackle the problem of high

volums

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volumes

volume

rubish

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rubbish

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, because relatively a majority of people do not care about what happens to their

waste

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. Some actions are tax enhancement and social services for households which ignore recycle bins or do not bother to separate dry and wet

rubishment

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rubbish

therefore

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, these

iresponsible

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irresponsible

responsible

citizens are obliged to follow the rules.

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, if individuals obey the structure, the rate of recycling will rise in society,

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leading

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to resource

predervation

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predation

and pollution.

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, there are other practical

solution

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solutions

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for encouraging people to take

actions

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action

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, like

increaing

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increasing

public awareness and establishing reward systems.

Firstly

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advertisements

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and campaigns have an important role in directing

public’s

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the public’s

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mind and

behavior

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behaviour

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thus

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, by introducing the processes of recycling and the positive effect on the ecosystems and the environment, authorities would

definitly encourange

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definitely encourage

them to follow

this

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path.

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, showing commercials about team

works

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work

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who collect

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collecting

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rubish

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rubbish

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from nature, and presenting the effects of gathering

waste

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from water

resourses

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resources

to prevent water contamination, attract

pubilc

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public

attention and

environmentaly

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environmental

aware

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awareness

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, offering alternatives

such

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as discounts on their bills or taxes, even the cost of

fuels

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fuel

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is more

decieving

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deceiving

rather than punishment,

additionally

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, constantly doing

this

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would make a habit out of it. In conclusion, it seems

the

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apply

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mandatory actions

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are

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neccesary

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necessary

for public enforcement

for

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incresing

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increase

rate

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the rate

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of recycling.

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, I assume that other remedies

such

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as offering rewards and

educationally

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educational

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awareness are more functional and

intelegent

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intelligent

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

309 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Waste management
Recycling
Sustainability
Mandatory
Voluntary
Legislative measures
Environmental impact
Public awareness
Regulation
Sanctions
Compliance
Recycling facilities
Consumer behavior
Waste reduction
Resource conservation
Circular economy
Eco-friendly
Biodegradable
Landfill
Global initiative

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