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the diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

the diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles
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The diagram illustrates
a
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the
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 process of recycling
plastic
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bottles
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.
Overall
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, these
process
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processes
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 have
a
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apply
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nine steps
as well
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as
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and
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 the most important steps are; throwing, taking, sorting,
compresing
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compressing
, crushing, washing, pelleting, raw material,
producing
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and producing
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. The recycling story starts with throwing
bottles
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 into
recycle
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recycling
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 containers, people come to take them and go through the recycling centre. In there suitable
bottles
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 which are clean separate to others in sorting steps. Separated
bottles
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 are compressed into
plastic
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 blocks and they are crushed into small pieces by a crushing machine. These pieces drop into the washing pool to wash for preparing the pellets machine. After pelleting, these wet plastics need to dry to become raw materials.The final step is producing new products
such
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 as clothes, school stuff, and even new
plastic
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bottles
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 which use raw materials. In summary, the recycling process of
plastic
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bottles
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 is
very
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a very
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 complex program to achieve but it is necessary to use them again and again
instead
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 of throwing them.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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