The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
The given bar chart illustrates the percentages of teachers in six different genres of
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institute
based on
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gender
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in 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in the category of private
school
and nursery
school
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school,
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men
outweigh
women
,
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interestingly
, both genders
represened
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represent
in the same percentages in the field of college.
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,
the
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remaining
categories
women
represented
in
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at
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higher rates than
men
. In detail, in terms of the
categories
of nursery/
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school
and primary
school
showed
similar
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pattern, in both
categories
men
accounted for less than
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in fifth, and
women
represented
in
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the majority, approximately 90%. Turning to the category of secondary
school
, despite still the rate for
women
was higher than
men
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, the gap was not as remarkable as
the
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previous
categories
. Looking more closely at the
categories
of private training
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institute
institutes
and
universy
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university
, in the private training
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institutes
men
accounted for just below
than
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60%, and
this
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this woman
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women
represented
in
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just above
than
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40%.
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, more
then
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60% of
universty
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university
teachers were
men
in that year
according to
the given figure.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, men, women, categories with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational settings
  • percentage
  • representation
  • disparities
  • predominance
  • gender imbalance
  • societal expectations
  • historical roles
  • implications
  • trends
  • gender gap
  • educational outcomes
  • gender stereotypes
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • perceptions
  • effectiveness
  • primary school
  • secondary school
  • nursery
  • university
  • further education
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