The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
The given bar chart illustrates the percentages of teachers in six different genres of
institude
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institute
genders
in 2010.
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gender
Overall
, it is clear that
in the category of private school
and nursery school
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school,
men
outweigh women
, interestlingly
, both genders Correct your spelling
interestingly
represened
in the same percentages in the field of college. Correct your spelling
represent
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in the
categories
women
represented in
higher rates than Change preposition
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men
.
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of nursery/ pre-
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preschool
school
and primary school
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categories
men
accounted for less than one
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women
represented in
the majority, approximately 90%. Turning to the category of secondary Change preposition
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school
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was higher than men
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in the
categories
.
Looking more closely at the categories
of private training institue
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institutes
men
accounted for just below than
60%, and Change preposition
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this
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these women
women
represented in
just above Change preposition
apply
than
40%. Change preposition
apply
Finally
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60% of Replace the word
than
universty
teachers were Correct your spelling
university
men
in that year according to
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